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The Moon Rises: A Short MLP Story by me!

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It's a beautiful day in the land of Equestria, the sun is shining, and ponies are, gathering at the Castle of the Two Sisters. Meanwhile, inside the Castle of the Two Sisters, Princess Celestia and Princess Luna are waiting for their royal subjects to pay their respects to them. However, as the day goes on, not one single pony pays their respects to Princess Luna. Suddenly, Princess Luna watches in anger as Princess Celestia gets all of the love and attention from their royal subjects. "You're so awesome Princess Celestia!'' one pony shouts as they glance at Princess Celestia.

"Um, excuse me, surely thou would also like to pay your respects to me,'' Luna says as she attempts to get the ponies attention. However, the pony ignores Princess Luna, and they continue to pay their respects to Princess Celestia. Later, on that evening, Princess Luna starts to argue with Princess Celestia. “It’s not fair, you get all of the love and attention while I sit in your shadow sister!” Princess Luna shouts angrily as she glances at Princess Celestia. “I don’t have time for this Luna, I’m turning in for the night we can talk, about this in the morning alright?” Princess Celestia asks as she glances at Luna.

“No, I want to talk, about it now sister!” Princess Luna shouts angrily as she glances at Princess Celestia. However, Princess Celestia ignores Luna sighing, and with that, she goes to lower the sun so that she can turn in for the night. Meanwhile, Princess Luna is in the hallway, she looks upset and she watches as Princess Celestia starts to lower the sun. Suddenly, Luna begins to sing as she says, “Now the hour has come at last a soft and fading light,” Luna begins to sing as she watches the sunset. “It crosses the horizon and it bids us goodnight, and what a lovely night it is to walk through a starry field,” Luna sings as she raises the moon. 

“To see the softer shades of the night now that the stars are shining bright,” Luna sings as she glances at the bright and shiny stars in the night sky. “So why is it that now, when is all quiet and at rest, when the stars are shining bright and all the world is at it’s very best,” Luna sings as she walks through a hallway. “The ponies of Equestria should lock themselves away to shun the moon and wait instead for sister’s sunny day?” Luna asks as she glances out a window. ”Am I so wrong to wish that they would see things like I do, and am I so wrong to think that they might love me too?” Luna sings as her eyes turn Nightmare Moon-like. “Why shouldn’t they adore me, is it not within my right, I won’t remain in my sister’s shadow, mine is not the lesser light,” Luna sings as her teeth sharpen.

”I will wait, no longer for them all to come around, and while the sun can plead and threaten, the moon will stand her ground!” Luna sings as she makes the moon rise. “It comes to that, at last, I will no longer yield the sky, if they cannot love but one Princess alone,” Luna sings as her cutie mark changes. “See, the moon is rising she has come to claim the heavens for her own,” Luna sings as her mane and tail changes. “And all will know the wonders of my dark and starry sky when I cast the world in eternal darkness!” Luna sings as her fur changes to a different color. “So, say goodnight to this, the final setting, of the sun, tomorrow dawns in darkness, the night will last forever!” Luna sings laughing evilly as her transformation into Nightmare Moon is complete.

The End.
This is a MLP short story I wrote, and it’s based upon The Moon Rises a song by Ponyphonic, basically the song takes place while Luna is turning into Nightmare Moon it would be cool if this song was cannon in the show, but it’s not.

Anyway, tell me what you think in the comments section below.
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SilverDragon1778's avatar
um it's eternal,  not enteral...